Welcome to the Writing Warriors weekly blog hop! It’s a great opportunity for you to meet new writers, read upcoming works or discover the stories writers craft in the dark of the night (or whenever they find the time). As usual, the snippet includes 8-10 sentences. Once you’re finished here, visit the participants and more addictive snippets.
Continuing from last week, Chris is in a dark basement spying on the confrontation between the Lord (I have questionable motives) Bayliss and a Mage he holds captive. The Mage holds his staff and prepares to take revenge on his captor.
Snippet:
The Mage moves the garnet on his staff across the floor as if lighting a match. Fire ignites, waiting above the gem before he sends a river of flames at Bayliss. Red and purple light explode, filling the room causing Chris to duck to protect his eyes. When it fades, Bayliss stands unharmed and void of sear marks. He laughs, the same wild laugh as before, pointing his palm at the Mage. A purple light, less intense as the first, shoots from the ring on his index finger, sending orangish red flames cascading at the Mage. Holding his staff in the defensive stance, Chris saw before, his barrier fizzles; too weak to summon the required magic to protect himself. He’s engulfed by flames, his chilling high pitched scream echoes into the hallway. Bayliss laughs, emptying a bucket of water over the Mage.
“I think that is enough for tonight,” he grins dragging the man to the wall and securing him in chains.
All right, that is it, for now, hope to see you all next week for the next instalment. And no I haven’t forgotten about the shiny knight, I promise he will be back soon. But I want to say thank you for your comments and praise, this is a very supportive community and you are all awesome!
*Previously titled as ‘A Flip of a Coin’
Read Chapter One here.
Anothet fantastic snippet!
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Ouch. Well, someone clearly has to do something about Bayliss! o.O
Good luck with your final editing push! You got this! 🙂
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Either you are deranged or a marvelous writer. I vote for the latter although your writing is enough to fan the flame!!
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Can’t wait to see how this scene progresses. Great bit of writing!
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Bayliss… good villain, which is why we don’t like him.
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Yes we do love to hate him 🙂
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Nice guy, this Bayliss. How can a person defeat someone with so much power?
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I’m working on the idea that his ring reflects magic. He has none of his own. Its ancient craft of infusing magic into special receptive objects. But the question is how did a nob like Bayliss come across it.
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Very descriptive writing! What a sadistic torturer he is!
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Thank you, this story is a bit darker than my usual stuff. I’m glad its working.
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